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The reviewer provided constructive feedback on the paper. They suggested being more specific about the visual impairments discussed. They also noted some awkward phrases and inconsistent references that could be clarified. While the draft was overall decent, the reviewer identified areas where the writing could be strengthened, such as explaining concepts more clearly and aligning the discussion of findings with the conclusion.

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shadowos

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