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Yiran actively participated in class and made efforts to enhance her writing organization and style. She successfully corrected broad statements but needs to focus on developing content for her PEEL paragraphs. Additionally, she should work on crafting engaging hooks for her essay introductions and conclusions.

Author

Victoria Chang

Language

EN